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In yesterday morning,Sam get up at six o'clock.Then he wash fach,had beakfast and rode bicks he wich his little sister to "Wenzhou" park.They are very happy.In noon,Sam and his parents had lunch in "McDonald’s",he like checken very much,but his mother sey: "Sam, the vegetable is good at you,eat some vegetable.But,too much checken is bad for you.“In afternoon,he and his classmates pleayed foodball atfour o'clock from six o'clock.He go home had dinner , then he and his father go for a walk.His father buy a music CD for he. Oh,it's an interesting day!