高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Ladies and gentlmen welcome to our city I'd like to tell you some thing about our city,Nan Jing , the capital of Jiang su province, lies in southeast of china, it has a population of 5 millon. the city has history of more than 2400 years , and was once capital of ten dynasties. nanjing is a beautiful city with many great place , like xuwuhu lake , jiming temple , stong city, and also have many moden factories and tall buildings