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Hello, my name is Lucy King. Lucy is my first name , King is my last name.I'm form the UK, I'm is a Englang girl.So,I can speak English.I'm 13 years old,I'm a student in a middle school.I'm kind,I ready to other and help thrie. I’d like to look for pan pel in form China.I like watch movies,so I can go to cinema with you on eevery weekend.I love sports,such as:football,tennis,teble tennis,so on.But,I siwm is very well.I Like music too,because it's very in interesting. Can you make my China pen pal? Oh,Love China.