单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Pen Pal Wanted I'm Lucy King, and I comes from the UK. I'm 12 years old this year. I want a pen pal from China, because I love China very much and I hope to learn more about China. I like playing sports, listening to music and seeing movies. If you are a Chinese girl and have the same hobbies as me, please write to me. I want to learn Chinese from you. May you help me? Write to me soon. Lucy King