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Hello, my name is Lucy King.I'm from the UK,so I can speak English.I'm 13 years old,I’m a student,and I can play sprots,listen to music,watch movies.I can go to cinema with on every weekend.I want a China pan pal,because I love China,the is a beautiful country.Can you make my pan pal,learn my Chinese?