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I like sprots,football is my favorite sprots.A chance may me fall in love football by chance.A long time ago,I meet football at frist in the way go home.And then,I and little friends play football togeter.In this day,I love football anymore. BEIKEHANWU is my favorite football satr.So I dream of a professional football player.I want to come ture my dream whoes play football everday.