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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；采用了一些简单的从句；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；连词使用偏少。
The picture descriped that there was a bottle one ground,and milk flowing out.there were two people showed different feeling facing this case.the man said sadly that it is all over,the other man said smilly that it had some thing. The cosmics tell us that people who is in pledge would have different attitude whatever in work、life、learning.people who is optimistic to case always finds out the good,pressimistic people often complains about loss.in a words,not or success is determined by one's attitude. In my opoinons,we do as the optimistic person.whatever difficults,we should cherish optimistic attitude.only this ,we can success.
