单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Last day I was very busy.In the morning I got up at six o'clock.Then I had breakfast.The breakfast is very big.I went to school at seven o'clock.School began at seven thirty.At noon I had tomatoes, hamburgers and potatoes for lunch.Class over at five o'clock p.m.I did my homework at six o'clock.Then i watched TV.I went to bed at nine p.m. Lsst i was very busy but i'm very happy ,too.