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I'm so happy that you will come where our houeshold hotel.There are some prices room in our household hotel.Single room is 30 yuan and double room is 20 yuan a day.And then,everyone meals price is 20 yuan a day.It's so comvenient and cheap. A surprise will come,you can cook in here or you will have a great dinner with us.In here,you can feel a deep family warm.It is so close that you will understand China.By the way,you can swiming,Mountion climbing,bathing in the season.If you have hot blood,you can take part in working greenhoues,but no salay. I hope you will fun in here.Have a good day.