七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

sam get up at six am yesterday.then,he took a bike to park and had fun.next,he had eat some food with him parents in the mcdonald's.besides,sam played basketball with him classmates until six pm that day.after the dinner,sam got for a walk with he father who buy a classic music cd to him.