湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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I have got a good friend,her name is Qian Rujie.She is 13 years old,and she is a beautiful girl, she has long hair and big eyes.She is very kind,and she ready to help others,we is likes she. In the this afetrnoon,I'm sad.She say:"Why do you sad?"I take to she,I'm worry my English,because I can speak English,but my English is not good.She know,say:"I know,don't worry,I can help you!"Oh,thanks. This is my good friend,Qian Rujie.