七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Samgot up at six on yesterday morning.He boght bike to the park ,and he had greated fun.he went to McDonald’s with his parents .At afternoon ,Sam palyed basketball from four to six with his classes,In dark ,Samwent for a walk with his father ,his father bounght a classical. CD Sam was very happy in the day !