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文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Recently,I'm aware of that some students have lost their confidence for English.It doesn't make any differences.As long as we can regain confidence,I believe that everyone can make great progress in English.But you eager to get achievement,you have to pay sweat. As we all know,with the globalization of economy and culture,English has developed the first language of the world.so English make an important influence in the world .nowadays,It is essential for us to adapt this sociology.In our daily life ,talking with foreigner,we need to speak English .Go shopping online ,you may be use English.All in all,English have come to our lives of every corner.so it is important for us to lern Enlish well. I suggested that we should read more,write more records in English.and then,you may be watch English movies or songs,which improve yourself listenning. Besides,you can comunicate with the foreigners in English.It is important thing to review on time.There are my some advice ,I think that they could help your to improve your English.
