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Recently,I'm aware of that some students have lost their confidence for English.It doesn't make any differences.As long as we can regain confidence,I believe that everyone can make great progress in English.But you are eager to get achievement,you have to pay efforts As we all know,with the globalization of economy and culture,English has developed the first language of the world.So English make an important influence in the world.nowadays,It is essential for us to adapt this sociology.In our daily life ,talking with the foreigner,we need to speak English .when you go shopping online ,you may be use English.All in all,English have entered every corner of our lives .so it is important for us to learn Enlish well. I suggested that we should read more,write more records in English.and then,you may be watch English movies or songs,which improve yourself listenning. Besides,you can communicate with the foreigners in English.It is the important thing to review on time.,Following those suggestion,I think that they could help your to improve your English.