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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2761
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Recently,I'm aware of that some students have lost their confidence for English.It doesn't make any differences.As long as we can regain confidence,I believe that everyone can make great progress in English.But you are eager to get achievement,you have to pay efforts As we all know,with the globalization of economy and culture,English has developed the first language of the world.So English make an important influence in the world.nowadays,It is essential for us to adapt this sociology.In our daily life ,talking with the foreigner,we need to speak English .when you go shopping online ,you may be use English.All in all,English have entered every corner of our lives .so it is important for us to learn Enlish well. I suggested that we should read more,write more records in English.and then,you may be watch English movies or songs,which improve yourself listenning. Besides,you can communicate with the foreigners in English.It is the important thing to review on time.,Following those suggestion,I think that they could help your to improve your English.

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