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2002年专业四级英语作文真题:保持健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:17浏览次数:1980
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题目 The Best Way to Stay Healthy
说明 Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.  And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet.  What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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How to keep health?diffent people have diffent ideals some people keep a balanced diet. others think we can do much more exercise.As for me ,l think the best way to stay healthy is do exercises everyday. Firstly,do exercise is good for our body.if you want to stay healthy,you must ensure a healthy body.secondly,we may keep a good mood. This can make us be a healthy person.thridly,we dont use some bad ways to keep our health .for example.some people go to school to buy some medicines.we can konw this is too bad. All in all.the best way to keep health is do more exercises.forthermore.we can take a balanced diet .

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