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A theme of the view to chinese students to share had hold in our school at last weekend.tThe host exper Kelly Lam teached our how importion to share and how to share.The conversation point out our education sysem can not teach students share with other.And though they are happy or say who is unwilling to share with other to beyond 30% students.N owaday,understant share and how to share is very importion and good for our growing.
