湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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Our monitor is a humer gay,his name is Li Lei,and he is 12 years now.He is very handsome with a popular haircut.He always likes wearing white coat,and white shoes.He is good at sport,such as football,basketball and pennis.Manytimes,he helps others when other classmate is in trouble.He is a good friend of all us,we all love him.