作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,不过单词拼写做的很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Our monitor Our class has 20 students in total,and our monitor is Li Lei who is 12 years old. He is a hummer gay with a good face.His skin is a little black and his eyes are so bright,and he has a handsome haircut. He always likes waring green clothes,and white shoes.But today,he is in a blue shirt and red trouses. He is a warm-heart,and likes helping others,we all like him.