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How To Protect Our Eyes If your eyes were hurt ,you will be in trouble because you could not see anything about the colorfull world.So,we need protect our eyes as carefull as possible. First of all,when we read books,we should have one time break each 30 minutes.Second,we should keep a distance from the television when we look TV.Third,maybe we can do some eyes exerses to relax our tied eyes.The last advice,eat carrots as more as possible. Something is too late when we find it,so let do it right now.