作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
How To Protect Our Eyes If your eyes were hurt,you will be in trouble because you could not see anything about the colorful world.So,we need protect our eyes as careful as possible. First of all,when we read books,we should have one time break each 30 minutes.Second,we should keep a distance from the television when we look TV.Third,we can do some eyes exercises to relax ourselves.The last advice,we can eat carrots as more as possible. Something is too late when we discover it,so let do it right now.