七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday.After that, he rode a bike to the park. He had a good time in the park. at noon, he had lunch in Mcdonald's with his parents. in the afternoon, he palyed basketball in the school from four clock till six clock. after supper, he went for a walk with his father, his father brought him a classic music CD. what a funny day sam had!