七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句数量过少；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday,Sam got up at 6:00 in the morning.After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had a great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in Mcdonald's with his parents.In the afternoon, Sam palyed basketball from four to six with his classmates. After supper, he went for a walk with his father,his father brought him a classical CD . It was a wonderful day for Sam.