七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Yesterday,Sam got up at 6:00 in the morning.After that, he rode his bike to the park. He had a great fun playing in the park. At noon, he had lunch in Mcdonald's with his parents.In the afternoon, Sam played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After supper, he went for a walk with his father,his father brought him a classical CD . It was a wonderful day for Sam.