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Hi Johnson, We had been received your puducts in 22th Dec, 3,000 in total. According to our signing of the No. 35 order, the number of products should be 3,500, We haven't received yet for another 500. Please check your product list, We are looking forward to your early reply! Best Regards, Cynthia