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My house was big and simple. It has 2 floor, front lawn and back yard. At the lawn, it has a small apple tree was stand at the middle, it has few branches on the side of the steps. when we go inside, it has hardwood floor at the sitting room. On the left it has a master bedroom, it only has a Queen bed and TV set on the front. However it has a beautiful bathroom. It has a window stand shower place, and big bath tub. It has 2 person hand sinks, of course a separate toilet room. Moreover it has a huge closet. On the center it has the sitting room like we see as we come in, but on the right, we going to see the kitchen. It is a open kitchen, it is not too big, but it has everything you need. It has stove, it can cook 4 pans at same time, it has oven, I can bake, and have so many storages, and definitely refrigerator, a huge one.it have 2 doors fridge and big freezer. Moreover we have a giant dine table we can have so many guests over. When we open the back door, we have a patio, and back yard is big. it has a trampoline at the center, but still so much more room we can use. at the end of yard, it has a garden, it has few kind of veggies we like. As we go up the 2nd floor, it has 4 room, a bathroom and sitting room. all 4 room was surround by sitting room, every room has their own closet, there isn't much in the room, but when we leave the room, everyone can gather at the sitting room have fun. I know my house was simple, I don't need so much in my house. But I still love my house.
