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Now days, Online shopping become a fashion way. There many advantage of online shopping. First, It's saving time and money, you needn't cost the time on the way to shop. the price is cheaper than real store. What's more, we can pick up what we need by seach key words. That's really fantastic! Though online shopping is convenient to us, It's also has many disadvantage. We can not touch or smell the goods. we don't know if it is real what we want. Sometime the size or color is also not same as real for the screen. My advise is that we can buy some commen thing form website. Such as: food, books, small elctricities, daily necessaries, etc. We can buy these thing form real store: shoes, clothes, etc.
