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We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend- Li lei. Li Lei is a top student. He is outgoing and hard-working. He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others. We get on well with each other, so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems. I’m so proud of him. I care so much about him that I want to do something meaningful for him. Before leaving school, I’ll send him a card that I make myself with my best wishes. I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
