七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句使用过少；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

sam awoke up at six clock yesterday.and then,he went to park by bike.playing is so happy.for luch with his parents in MacDonald.at four o'clock sam played basketball with classmates at schoo till six o'clock.he went for a walk with his farther after supper,and his father bought a classical cd for him.what a interesting day!