七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. Then he rode his bike to the park, he enjoyed himself in the park. At the noon ,he had lunch in McDonalld's with his parents. Sam played basketball form four o'clock to six o'clock with his classmates in the school yesterday afternoon. After dinner Sam and his father went for a walk, his father bought a classical music CD , he was very happy.Because he enjoys the music.He had a wonderful time yesterday!