七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o’clock yesterday morning. Then he rode his bike to the park, he enjoyed himself in the park. At the noon,he had lunch in McDonalld's with his parents. Sam played basketball form four o'clock to six o'clock with his classmates in the school yesterday afternoon. After dinner Sam and his father went for a walk, his father bought a classical music CD, he was very happy.He had a good time yesterday!