初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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my favourite movie hello,girl and boys,i'm Justin.Yang.I like seeing films,my favourite movie is Spider man. it is very interesting and not terrible.my best friend Peter like this film,too.we always go to see this film together.we always happy.I like Spider man.Because it is very interseting.I like other movie too,but Spider man is my most favourite movie.