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初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:56浏览次数:2027
要求:
以“我的理想”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

It’s reported that there are more than sixty million students and teachers watched the first space lecture hosted by Wang Yaping in the Tiangong-1. It has aroused hot concern and discussion. The lecture was about motion in micro-gravity environments and the surface tension of liquid in space, as well as the concepts of weight, mass and Newton's Law. Many people say this activity will produce far-reaching impact. It will first inspire children’s interest in space and then to work hard. In addition, youth people can be more intuitive access to aerospace knowledge by this way. Their interaction with the astronauts would make children are no longer strangers to the distant universe, so that stimulates their love of science and knowledge of worship, develop lofty ideals in the heart of aerospace. In short, scientific knowledge has helped open a window for the youngsters to know about the universe. I am sure that this activity will take root in youngers’ heart as a seed, and ultimately grow into towering trees.

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