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My monitor is isteresting. She is 13 years old. She like to play soccer.She also like music.She usually get to school ride a bike.Sometimes she get to school on foot.We like with she play games.She always eat fruit fof breakfast.She from the chian.She is a good girl. She usually do homework on weekend.