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My monitor is interesting. She is 13 years old. She like to play soccer.She also like music.She usually ride a bike to school.Sometimes she get to school on foot.We like to play with her.She always eat fruit for breakfast.She from the chian.She is a good girl. She usually do homework on the weekend.