单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I am thirty years old.I am from the UK. I can speak English.I like sports and music. I also like movies.I want to make a Chinese friend.Because I love China.She can help me to learn Chinese.She like sports,music and movies,too.Call me.