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单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
My first name is Lucy and my last name is King.I am thirty years old.I am from the UK. I can speak English.I like sports.I like music and I also like movies. I want to make a Chinese friend.Because I want to learn Chinese.She can help me to learn Chinese.She like sports.She like music and she like movies,too. Call me.
