初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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My name is Jane.I am a boy. I am 13. I have a dream that I want to be a cook in the future. I like cooking.I think cook is interesting for me.I often cook for my parents.My parents like my provide food for them.So I am happy when I hear about this .