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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear ZhongYan: How time flies.You have been leave XinJiang three years. At the moment,I am on vacation for two weeks.I didn't have plans of travel,I‘m going to stady at home in two weeks. During the vacations,I usually get up late and go to bed late too.I got up at 11 am this morning,Because,I surfed the internet until 2 am. So,I didn't eat breakfast.Now,It's 3 pm,I'm eating a big lunch.I'm having noodles for lunch.After lunch,I'm going to walk to vist my mother this afternoon.I had to eat more.My home is 8 kilometers distant from my mother's home.I think,to go to for walk is health for me.You know,three years ago,I was a lazy woman.But,I go to for walk after meal every day,now. Later tonight,My husband will pick me up at my mother's home. Tomorrow is saturday ,So,tomorrow morning,my family will get up early,We will drive 3 hours to go to a party in other city.We must arrive there before 1 pm. On vacations,the life always happy. I hope to hear from you soon.Best regards. Dear Friend:SUE APR,2,2015
