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人教新目标七年级英语下册 Unit 12单元 测试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:28浏览次数:4859
要求:
阅读下列规章,然后写一篇短文来介绍Tom’s rules。
Tom’s rules
1. Get up at 6:00.
2. Go to school at 6:15.
3. Don’t eat outside.
4. Don’t listen to music on school days.
5. Don’t watch TV on school nights.
6. Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.
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文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Tom usually gets up at 6 o'clock.After breasket,he leaves for school at a quarter past 6.As a student,he was told that there are some taboos.For example,he never doesn't eat outside.He can not listen to music and doesn't watch TV when he on school days.His parents also asked him that he be back home by 12 o'clock in the morning and by twenty past 9 in the evening.

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