请作者增加学术词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Hi,everyone.I’m SUE.It’s great to be here today to give you a speech of B level. Today, the topic comes from an Internet posting. Foreigners are also very envious of Chinese as well as the life in China. SAFETY I asked a foreign teacher of WEB what he likes most in China.He said:China is very safe. Yes, In China, private guns are considered illegal ,So public security is good, Not like the rules in some other countries, you don't know who will be carrying a gun. In China You can go out to play in the evening and don't worry about your safety. FOOD Many foreigners really like Chinese food.In XinJiang,especially at WEB classes,foreign teachers always mention some traditional Xinjiang food, such as“大盘鸡”“拌面” when we are talking something related to delicious food. CONVENIENCE In many cities of China,even many suburbs, Food and clothing living line is very convenient. There are many stores open 24 hours a day in China. There are 3 stores downstairs my apartment, include two vegetable stores, a fruit store. Also, I can choose different ways of transportation,private car、bus、taxis. PRICE Since MaYun founded TaoBao which is one of the most popular on-line websites. Our cost of living is getting cheaper. people can buy anything through TaoBao.Even some strange things, like Slag male killer. The killers help you to check boyfriend’s loyalty.Of course, Most of the goods are common things. Everything has two sides.The advantage also could become the shortcoming. also could become, We are lucky to live in such an active place. That all.Thank you.