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There are all kinds of Dumpling in Lasoi Dumpling House. Today,two kinds of Dumpling on sale,the vagetable is 2 YUAN 20,beef mix vagetable is 5 YUAN 20. Welcom come our house.Address:HePing street 234 Telephone:0373-2256 There are all kinds of Dumpling in Lasoi Dumpling House. Today,two kinds of Dumpling on sale,the vagetable is 2 YUAN 20,beef mix vagetable is 5 YUAN 20. Welcom come our house.Address:HePing street 234 Telephone:0373-2256