正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
First of all,let me get something straight:This is my third English journal,But,It doesn't a real journal.If you think I'm going to write "feelings" in here,you are crazy. I'm doing these exercises,the only reason, I want to learn English well . I don't konw what happened later on.Isn't this a pisces? I'm a pisces,Although,I hate this. Pisces woman is a dreamar. So , I figure that my English is going to come in handy.It's like saying:Practice makes perfect.So, don't ask me:Why?What for?What the hell is going on? These days,I'm reading a book of 'Diary of a Wimpy Kid" .It's difficult for me.Stop laughing at me.I‘m not kidding,It's true. I only can say the simplest sentences. There are ten books of "this kid" in my home.Last year,I bought them for my son.But,you know.They are mine,now.