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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
First of all,let me get something straight:This is my third English journal,But,It doesn't a real journal.If you think I'm going to write "feelings" in here,you are crazy. I'm doing these exercises,the only reason, I want to learn English well,I don't konw what happened later on.Isn't this a pisces? I'm a pisces,Although,I hate this. Pisces woman is a dreamer. So,I figure that my English is going to come in handy.It's like saying:Practice makes perfect.So, don't ask me:Why?What for?What the hell is going on? These days,I'm reading a book of 'Diary of a Wimpy Kid" .It's difficult for me.Stop laughing at me.I‘m not kidding,It's true. I only can say the simplest sentences. There are ten books of "this kid" in my home.Last year,I bought them for my son.But,you know.They are mine,now.
