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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累还不够，拼写错误也要注意；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The First Step Is Always The Hardest As the saying goes.The first step is aways the hardest. So far I have walked about 275 kilometres.Tell the truth,I feel so surprised.My friends all know a thing that I 'm very lazy.My leader always says“a young idler an old beggar”. Eight year ago,I was a reporter.At that time,life without plans. But,we were all very happy . My frends and I were not rich and aways spent money every mouth,At the end of month ,we are broke.I hope I can make more money. But now,I think ,the health,accompany my family,studying and learn to be thankful are inportant than money. At the moment,I am on unpaid vacations.So,As I said at the beginning,I began to walk,studying english,visit my parents-in-law,accompany my mother and so on. It took me an hour and a half to write these words ,Cause my english is not very well.In fact,I already have learned English for nine months.During the holiday,I have made a plan for learning english . This essay is part of holiday writing plan.I hope ,it isn't too difficult-to write four short essays every week.I know it isn't perfect,it will has a lot of mistakes,such as grammar, spelling, making sentences etc.But,who cares,actions speak louder than words. I'm busy during this holiday,but,if someone wants to ask me to eat a big meal,I woule be very gald to go. At the end,I stand corrected,I wrote these words in three hours. SUE Mar,22,2015
