正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Our Monitor hello,I am kangkang.I am in the school for half year.In our class,our monitor is good .He is Li Ming.He is 12 year old.He have big eyes and short hair.He like black clothes. He like blue color and red color.He is outgoing.The teacher likes him because he is king of students.He is friendly.We are good friends.