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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；文中从句数量过少；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend一Li Lie. He is my the best friend in all classmates. I like he very much. He is outgoing and always help others, so many classmates like he, too. He like everythings, and he get great progress in study. So he usually help me with my poor English. At the end of term, I will give he an bear for express my thanks. In short, I hope he can happy every day, and go to a good senior high school.
