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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend一Li Lie. He is my best friend. I like he very much. He is outgoing and always help others, so many classmates like he, too. He like everything, and he get great progress in study. So he usually help me with my poor English. At the end of term, I will give he an bear for express my thanks. In short, I hope he can happy every day, and go to a senior high school which he want to.
