七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam waked up at 6 o'clock yesterday. Cycled bicycle to the park after that . He played at the park joyously. At afternoon, He went to McDonald's with his family to have their launch. Sam played basketball with his friends at the school in the afternoon, he played from 4.00pm till 6.00pm. After dinner, He went for a walk with his father, his father then buy for him a classical music CD. Sam was so funny today!