初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

My net friend is Lily. She is a high school student. She likes reading english books. We are not in the same city. But we often chat on net on weekends. She taught me a lot about how to write english articles. I like to chat with her very much.