作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Football is my favorite, I like it due to event by chance. I found a football on my way home, the shape it is round ball attracted me at once. I fell in love with it. From then on, I began to play football with my friends five days a week, three hours each day. It became the part of my life. We often train ourselves, and sometime compete in football games in order to progress our football skills. I admire the Beckham most among all the football stars, it is not his handsome appearance but his high skills that impress me. I hope that I become a professional player who like him. It is my greatest dream.